Story starter
In the deepest depths of the river it lay waiting.The eye was as green as a garden on a summer's day…….
Narrative Plan
Title: The deadly snake
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Introduction
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Who:crocodile
What:deadly
Where:river
When:100 years ago
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Introduce the problem
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fangs teeth,rough skin,green eye.
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How did the problem get worse?
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Someone made him mad.
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Resolution (How did you solve the problem?)
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He had a feed.
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What was the lesson learnt?
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The lesson was never yell.
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The deadly crocodile
100 years ago there was a deadly crocodile in the river.
The crocodile was starving he had green eyes,fangs teeth,rough skin and it will eating anything that runs or walk.
The crocodile seen a person.
the crocodile was sneaking to the boat and jumped the crocodile finally got the person.
The crocodile was still hungry and there was another person coming the crocodile had got the person.
The crocodile was happy this time people came lots of people the crocodile sneaking up to the people he jumped up for excitement people heard him and ran off with a scream.
The lesson was never yell for excitement.
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